Write a schedule-change notice that tells readers exactly what they need to know. This fictional example includes every required fact and does not depend on the documents elsewhere in the course.
Confirmed brief: the Horizon Workshop takes place on October 17. The Data session moved from the morning to 2–3:30 p.m., in room B. The Design session keeps its time. People registered for Data need to check whether they can attend at the new time. Capacity, price, certificates and a reply channel were not provided.
Ready-to-copy request:
Write a short email to people registered for the Horizon Workshop. Include a subject, greeting, schedule change and guidance for the reader. Use only these facts: on October 17, the Data session runs from 2 to 3:30 p.m. in room B, replacing its morning time. Design keeps its time. Ask people registered for Data to check whether they can attend at the new time. Do not invent price, places, certificates, contact details, year, mandatory confirmation or a deadline. Use a direct, friendly tone.
One version ready to check:
Subject: New time for the Data session — Horizon Workshop
Hello!
The Data session at the Horizon Workshop on October 17 will run from 2 to 3:30 p.m. in room B. This replaces the morning time announced previously.
The Design session keeps its time.
If you registered for Data, please check whether you can attend at the new time.
Thank you!
Review in three passes. First compare the date, time, duration and room with the brief: 2–3:30 p.m. is 90 minutes, and no other sentence should retain the previous time. Next check the requested action: checking availability is not the same as demanding a reply by an invented deadline. Finally, read on a small screen; the change should appear before a long introduction.
For a shorter message, retain the core: “Horizon Workshop: the October 17 Data session has moved to 2–3:30 p.m. in room B. Design keeps its time. If you registered for Data, please check your availability for the new time.” The form changes; the facts do not.
To adapt this, replace the brief with authorized, confirmed information. Ask the organizers about any missing fact needed for sending; do not ask AI to guess. Check the recipient and text before copying them into email or a messaging app. Generating the draft does not send anything automatically.
The result of this first step: a subject and notice you can use after your review. The listed documents and templates are optional supports for the full course; this exercise’s facts are already included in the preview.